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Thursday, August 7, 2014

7 Lucys Excerpt

Here's a short excerpt from my new short story
"7 Lucys"


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     Mondays were the worst.  I hated Mondays.  The job had always been boring, so mind-numbingly boring.  That is, until she showed up.  

     I was drawn to her for some reason.  Rolled over the maid’s foot tryin’ to get to the window.  I couldn’t take my eyes off her.  I wondered where she’d come from and what misfortune had brought her to motel hell.  She definitely didn’t fit in with all the low-lifes who frequented this place or the lost families who wandered in.  She was bright and clean and beautiful.   

     There she was unpacking her shiny car.  Corey must’ve checked her in when he was covering the front desk while I was fixing a toilet in one of the rooms.  I searched the sign-in book for her name….  

     Lucy.  She just signed it Lucy.  She wrote it in a funny way:  all in fancy cursive caps.

     That happens a lot around here.  People reluctant to give their real names, I mean.  Signing only their first name or using a fake name.  Corey’s policy is to look the other way.  “Beggars can’t be choosey!” as he would say.  In my mind, it isn’t always clear who the beggars are, us or them?  We get desperate for customers sometimes.  There are times when the motel is deserted, and we’re not sure if we can even keep the lights on.

     I wondered if Lucy was her real name.  Her yellow skirt fluttered around her shapely brown legs as she walked in and out of Room 27.  She was like a fresh summer breeze.  I didn’t usually go for brown chicks.  I say brown ‘cause from a distance, I couldn’t really tell what race she was.  She could have been Hispanic or African-American, wasn’t for sure then, and I’m still not for sure.  I’m not racist or anything.  I just can’t tell you if she was black or Hispanic or both.  It didn’t matter to me.  Pretty is pretty… and she was pretty.  I guess the truth of the matter is that I’ve always been too chicken shit to ask a girl out if she wasn’t white.  They seemed out of my league somehow.  That sounds stupid now that I’m putting it out there.  But, I suppose we all have stupid voices in our heads that talk us out of going for what we want, and this wheelchair doesn’t make it any easier for me....